My story, as bullet points.
1. Svieta checks herself out in mirror
2. Loses her geese
3. Follows them into forest, gets lost
4. Finds hut, curls up for night
5. Baba Yaga is a scary old woman
6. Svieta tricks her, escapes
7. Baba Yaga chases
8. Svieta throws her mirror behind her
9. Mirror turns into lake
10. Lake stops Baba Yaga
11. Svieta can find her way home now
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I really like your story, its very captivating. I think your getting a little overwhelmed because of how much depth there is you the story. Maybe go back to your story beats, they seem pretty concise. Also, it seems like you can just tell a part of the story... maybe start from where Baba Yaga walks in, there seems to be enough of a story just in how scary Baba Yaga herself.
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